I received a lot of positive feedback on my last video about how my energy levels were very engaging
and that I did a good job informing the audience about my business idea. I did receive feedback that
I need to make it clearer that my business idea is an opt-in concept, and that insurance companies
will NOT be tracking the physical activity of every individual within their program without their consent.
Individuals must ask their provider if they can opt in to the program and from there, they will have their
physical activity monitored to be used by insurance companies to give them higher deductibles or more
accurately predict costs associated with that individual. I really believe my business idea is extremely
unique and allows insurance companies to become more dynamic, modern organizations instead of
archaic, boring things that every adult has to suffer to pay for without having much control over how
much they pay to their insurance providers.
and that I did a good job informing the audience about my business idea. I did receive feedback that
I need to make it clearer that my business idea is an opt-in concept, and that insurance companies
will NOT be tracking the physical activity of every individual within their program without their consent.
Individuals must ask their provider if they can opt in to the program and from there, they will have their
physical activity monitored to be used by insurance companies to give them higher deductibles or more
accurately predict costs associated with that individual. I really believe my business idea is extremely
unique and allows insurance companies to become more dynamic, modern organizations instead of
archaic, boring things that every adult has to suffer to pay for without having much control over how
much they pay to their insurance providers.
Hey Meghan, I definitely agree with previous feedback that your energy levels is what makes this an engaging and interesting pitch. Not only does it make the audience more excited for your product, but it makes them more attentive to what you have to say, potentially making yourself for trustworthy. Furthermore, emphasizing the privacy aspects of your business is key and I would definitely continue to focus on this going forward.
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ReplyDeleteGreat pitch, great product idea. I would look to using an insurance company that gives back to their clients. That is very rare! You are confident in your presentation and show how your product is unique. Maybe taking it a step further for the next pitch would be to show how much one could hypothetically save as opposed to other insurance companies that don’t offer this. Maybe with a chart or something Since your business is unique, this would showcase this as your competitive advantage even more to drive it home.
Hey Meghan, it is clear to see that you are much more excited and convey more passion in this elevator pitch! It seems as though you've been able to refine your idea enough to make more and more consumers hop on board with the idea. Your idea is unique, ahead of the times, and sure to attract business.
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